Another mock-up

Here is the mock-up of the birthday greeting card for the Yorkshire dialect series. The photos show how it will be packaged.

Changes needed:

Stock needs altering, at the moment it is on a smooth matt stock and i think a more textured stock should be tried out as well. More research into the stocks used on embossed cards is needed.

Barcode needs to be added to the top labels.

A few technicalities with the type pattern too that needs sorting.

Other than this I am quite happy with this mock-up so I'm going to make these alterations and test stocks etc then see what other people think.