yorkshire birthday cards.. nearly finished

Here are some shots of the Yorkshire birthday cards I mocked up and showed at 2nd crit, the feedback from the first crit was to add more sterotypical yorkshire images to the cards instead of the topographic map of the yorkshire moors. After trying out these images and showing them at the second crit, people still didn't think they were working and suggested I should try just working on the type, I need to make a few adjustments to some of the sayings but I think they are right, the type is strong enough on the card to stand alone. feedback on the card toppers were positive so I don't need to re-design them which is good! - (these were blogged previously)